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Monday, 22 August 2016

Me, Conrad and Jaiden we were riding our bmx bikes and we were on the real track. After that the game starts. I was on full speed. Then Jaiden’s bike hit a rock and his leg  broke. Then the ambulance picked him up. Then they took him to the hospital. They said that his leg has to get chopped off. They put the fake leg on it was so sad. Then he couldn’t do bmx anymore. So it was me and Conrad left. The end.

1 comment:

  1. GOOD JOB!
    I liked that you had all your capital letters in the right places.
    next time I would recommend writing a bit more writing in your story.

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